Hi BW
It sounds like writing it was really helpful and cathartic for you. I reckon it feels *so* good to get it out of your head and onto paper. You're very witty and funny, and I'm pretty sure your family/ILs wouldn't have a clue about that, would they now?
I hope that you can find a way - whether through editing or whatever you need to do to feel comfortable - to be able to give this to your family/
DH's family. Perhaps you can attach it as is with a note of explanation: what brought you to writing them etc.
Who knows? I hope that you can find a way to help your family to wake up a bit, even though it shouldn't be up to you to do that, and it's not your fault they're behaving as they are.
Miss C